STC
Newsletter Articles:
I have tried to select some of the articles that are still
relevant and may be of interest to technical writers and
people in related professions.
STC Meeting -
November 2002
'A Unique Experience' for STC Members
Speaker: Kevin von Appen (Associate Director of Ontario
Science Centre)
STC-Toronto members at the November meeting held up ropes,
put on ties and ate jelly beans to learn first hand about
the Ontario Science Centre's approach to technical
communication. The speaker was Kevin von Appen, an
Associate Director of the Science Centre and head of a team
that creates museum exhibits and website content. The
centre has developed their own techniques for designing
exhibits, and Kevin's presentation both described and
demonstrated their approach.
Kevin begun by asking volunteers to assist him in holding
up a long rope, which he wrapped around the entire audience
before threading it through the centre aisle and back again
to the front. When the process was complete he explained
that the length of rope represented the history of our
planet and that humans had only existed for the final two
inches, which he held up for all to see. The point of the
exercise was to give the audience a different perspective
about time and our history. More importantly for our
purposes though, it demonstrated the Ontario Science Centre
approach to presenting scientific knowledge. The centre
aims to create exhibits that engage multiple senses and
feelings, and in doing so create 'unique experiences'. In
this illustration, the people involved experience the
tactile feeling of the rope, curiosity as to what Kevin is
doing, and possibly embarrassment about standing up in
front of everyone. All of these things make the experience
unique and memorable, and this helps people to accept and
understand the message.
Kevin them presented some statistics to show why they need
to go to such lengths. The general public is being deluged
by commercial messages at a far greater rate than was the
case even thirty years ago. Luckily the human mind is
naturally resistant to change and so has a defense against
getting overwhelmed. However, this means that the
scientific community faces a challenge in getting its
message across; it has to find a way to cut through the
clutter so it can overcome old beliefs and fallacies. While
this is difficult, it is not impossible and Kevin cited the
increasing concern about global warming as a sign that the
scientific community can successfully make a case to the
public.
Kevin then presented the Science Centre's ten step approach
to creating an exhibit. These points can be applied to
almost any work of technical communication.
1) Know who your audience is, know what you want to say and
know how you want to say it.
2) Marry your message to the context.
3) Find an interesting angle to attract and keep your
audience. (For example, the rope representing time.)
4) Lead your audience, but don't get bogged down.
5) Anticipate and address questions.
6) Make connections between your subject and life outside.
7) Pretend you are talking to a friend. Try putting "Hey
Joe..." in front of every sentence you've written and
change it if it sounds silly.
8) Be consistent, but don't fall into a rigid design which
affects your content.
9) Lighten up... don't be afraid to use word play and
humour.
10) Test your writing and approach. Kevin admitted they
don't always get it right!
A pair of illustrations concluded the presentation. In the
first Kevin showed the difficulty of one way communication
by having a hapless volunteer instruct people on putting on
a tie, without being able to see the people he was
instructing. In the final presentation he demonstrated the
difference between 'taste' and 'flavour' by asking the
audience to hold their nose and then chew on an orange
jelly bean; although the audience could detect the
sweetness of the jelly bean they could not identify its
flavour (root beer) until their noses were unplugged. As
with the rope exercise, both of these illustrations used
multiple sensations and emotions to get their message
across.
The Ontario Science Centre has been presenting science to
the general public for nearly forty years, and the approach
they have developed is a useful guide for all technical
communicators. Kevin both described this approach and
illustrated it, resulting in some unique experiences and a
worthwhile evening for STC members.

STC Meeting -
April 2002
Get Ready for XML
Speaker: Bernard Aschwanden (Adobe Certified Expert in
Framemaker and Acrobat, Trainer)
Are You Ready for XML? According to Bernard Aschwanden, you
should be! Bernard has delivered document training in
Europe and North America and has helped hundreds of
companies develop documentation strategies. He addressed
the monthly meeting of the STC Toronto Chapter on April
9th.
A major advantage of XML is that it separates content from
presentation. An XML document may contain a title, chapter
headings, diagrams and other elements, each identified
within markup tags. The application or device reading the
document sees these tags and then determines how the
content will be presented. For example, while a web browser
on a desktop computer may show chapter headings in red, the
monochrome LCD display on a cellphone might use bold text
or underlining. Both devices will display the same XML
document but each one will optimize the presentation
according to its own specifications. This is the promise of
XML.
Bernard's chosen creation tool for XML documents is Adobe
FrameMaker. He showed off the new version 7 which has just
been announced for Windows, Macintosh (Classic only!) and
Unix computers. Bernard started out with a single
FrameMaker document and showed how quickly it could
generate a PDF print file, a webpage and a Microsoft Help
file. The task was completed in less than 20 minutes,
including some tinkering time and some sports banter.
(apparently though technical writers don't have much
interest in Toronto's teams)
According to Bernard every technical writer will be using
XML within two years. The simple reason for this is that
the biggest companies in the industry, such as Microsoft
and Adobe, are committed to making XML the next big thing.
There are also huge advantages to using XML as more and
more devices are used to access internet content.
Even if you are not producing XML documents right now, you
can still plan ahead and create documents that are easy to
convert into XML later. This can be done by applying
'styles' to all the content of your document. Applying a
'style' to an element, such as a chapter heading, attaches
a label to that content. When the file is imported into an
XML application such as FrameMaker, that label is
recognized and markup tags are created. These tags can then
be easily modified throughout the entire document.
While XML poses yet another learning challenge to technical
writers, the concepts (especially for those who already
know HTML) are quite simple and the benefits are obvious.
Bernard Aschwanden's presentation convincingly showed how
quick and easy it is for a single XML document to be
delivered for multiple applications. With clients
increasingly demanding output in different formats, XML
could be a real time saver for technical writers.
STC Meeting - March
2002
Finding Your Next Job
Speakers: Michael Barwick (STC Toronto Website Manager),
Kim Watson (STC Toronto Employment Manager), Mona Albano
(STC Programme Manager)
The March meeting of the STC Toronto chapter focused on the
highly practical topic of finding your next technical
writing job. A show of hands indicated that many in
attendance were looking to do exactly that. They were
treated to brief presentations by three STC members
followed by a question and answer session.
First to speak was STC Web Manager Michael Barrick who
works at Sun Microsystems. Having recently hired some
technical writers he brought an employer's perspective to
the panel. He broke a successful job hunt down into three
stages: get the interview, win the interview, and succeed
at the job. Your résumé must be absolutely bulletproof for
you to get an interview as it will be held to a higher
standard than those of other job seekers. In the interview
you must appear professional and confident; remember that
you are sizing up the company as much as they are sizing up
you. Finally, once you get the job you should make sure you
continue to learn new things and add new accomplishments to
your résumé. This will help you in the next job hunt.
Kim Watson is the STC Employment Manager and a freelance
technical writer. She emphasized the importance of
maintaining an enthusiastic attitude while job searching.
She also suggested that taking a course while you seek a
job helps you maintain a routine, builds your skills, and
shows potential employers that you like to work.
The third speaker was STC Programme Manager Mona Albano who
has been a freelance technical writer since 1991. She
identified four qualities necessary for a successful job
search; focus, energy, skills and personal approach. To
focus, you must treat the job search as your full time job.
This will require energy, both to continue the search and
to maintain your enthusiasm. Your skills must be kept
current and you should not hesitate to upgrade and retool
when necessary. Finally, you must present a positive 'can
do' attitude... employers want people who solve problems.
After the initial presentations the panel discussed
questions from the floor. Asked by the first questioner to
recommend a good agency for technical writers, the panel
agreed that job seekers should consult with several
agencies to see who would work the hardest for them.
However, you should not stop there; many positions are not
advertised and some companies may not even realize they
need a technical writer. To find these jobs you need to
find a way to meet engineers and developers... perhaps
through their professional organizations or even through
other less work oriented groups. Technical writing is not a
single industry but a profession serving many different
industries, and so you have to cast a wide net when
searching for work.
One person asked how to build a good list of contacts. It
was agreed that membership in the STC was an excellent
start but that you had to go further. After all, if a
position comes up through the STC you will be in
competition with all the other technical writers. Therefore
you need to network effectively and tell lots of people you
are job hunting, in fact Barrick said you had to be
"absolutely shameless at self promotion". Volunteer work
was mentioned as a great way to make contacts.
Not surprisingly, some of the questions to the panel were
really complaints about the current job environment. One
job hunter said that employers have no interest in his
writing skills... they only want to know what software he
knows how to use. Another unlucky applicant was lured to an
interview only to have an unscrupulous company try to sell
him a course with a vague promise that future employment
was likely. Several people also agreed that job interviews
with Primerica were really just sales pitches.
Other people though shared some useful tips. One person who
had his résumé posted to a job website dramatically
increased the number of responses he received by updating
it daily. This is because agencies favour the most recent
postings when they look for applicants. Another person
mentioned that a new initiative to speed the processing of
mutual fund sales will result in a need for extensive
documentation. Her contact compared the impact on the
financial services industry to that of the threat of the
Y2K bug.
Although many people at the meeting were looking for work
there were some signs that the situation was improving and
one person even announced that his company was looking to
hire some technical writers. This bodes well for the future
and hopefully many who attended this meeting learned some
tricks to help them find employment soon.
STC Meeting -
January 2002
Has Your Writing Been Stress Tested?
Speaker: Klaus Hofer (Training Consultant,
Psychologist)
You are a paramedic. You have been called to an emergency.
You rush to the scene and discover an unconscious person
whose face is turning green. You do not know why. In their
pocket is some medication, complete with instructions. You
unfold the instructions. You see several pages of small
print. Nothing jumps out at you. You start to read. The
victim’s face is turning ever more green. What do you
do?
Professor Klaus Hofer used this story to kick start his
address to the January meeting of the STC Toronto chapter.
Hofer holds a degree in experimental psychology and his
studies focus on the area of usability. His expertise in
this field is widely recognized and he has conducted
seminars for many corporate and governments clients.
Stepping back into the shoes of our poor paramedic, what
was the problem with the instructions? They were logical.
They were accurate. They were even concise. And as a
paramedic they were well within your understanding, if only
you had not been desperately trying to save the
patient’s life. And that is the crucial point... the
instructions failed to consider the psychology of the user.
They did not take into account that a person trying to save
a patient will be very stressed and looking for short,
explicit instructions. Finding the answers required
concentration and study, and this made the document useless
in an emergency situation.
Hofer believes that good design and good writing require a
knowledge of your audience and an understanding of human
psychology. He illustrated his point with a true story. A
European shopping mall was the target of complaints for
having bathrooms which were hard to find. To solve the
problem, they installed signs all over the mall. As a test,
they then led people to different places in the mall and
told them to locate the bathroom. The test subjects were
able to do this and the problem was considered solved.
Except that complaints kept coming in. The reason? The
customers had an added cause for anxiety which caused them
to miss the signs. Unlike the test subjects, they actually
did need to go to the bathroom.
Hofer went on to give some suggestions on how technical
writers can reduce stress for their users. One way of doing
this is to incorporate ‘rewards’ into your
documentation. Hofer used the example of someone asking
directions to the railway station. If you tell them to
“walk 500 metres, turn left and proceed 600 metres,
then turn right and walk 300 metres” their stress
will slowly increase until they reach their destination.
They might even give up before that point and ask someone
else. However, if you tell them to “walk 500 metres
till you come to the bank, turn left and proceed 600 metres
till you come to the hotel, turn right and proceed 300
metres to the station,” then each landmark is a
‘reward’ that reduces their stress by
confirming to them that they are taking the correct route.
Interestingly, Hofer pointed out that men tend to give
directions using only distances while women tend to use
only landmarks. Neither method is complete; while the
former creates stress, the latter will lead to big problems
if the person misses a landmark.
Hofer concluded his speech by commenting on some examples
of good and bad websites. Dismissing superfluous
decoration, he emphasized the importance of clear
documentation with titles and subtitles which accurately
describe the content. Finally he warned writers that gender
bias and cultural insensitivity can also distract readers
from your instructions and should be avoided. Hofer’s
most important message though was that technical writing
should enable users to perform actions, rather than
teaching for its own sake. A hard point to dispute,
especially if you were that paramedic or the even less
fortunate patient.
STC Meeting -
December 2001
Can Technical Writers Bridge the Ingenuity Gap?
Speaker: Kim Vicente (Professor in the Mechanical and
Industrial Engineering Department and Director of the
Cognitive Engineering Laboratory at the University of
Toronto)
According to University of Toronto Professor Kim Vicente
the answer might be yes. Vicente was the guest speaker at
the December meeting of the STC Toronto chapter. A member
of the engineering faculty, Vicente studies how human
beings interact with technology. His recent work entitled
'Cognitive Work Analysis' has been described as a landmark
in this field.
Vicente begun by showing some notorious examples of bad
design including government tax forms and the ubiquitous
unset flashing clock on many VCRs. While these examples
were greeted with laughter, the talk took on a darker tone
when he turned his gaze to medicine, nuclear energy and the
petrochemical industry. In these areas bad design is not
just an annoyance but a cause of horrendous expense and
even loss of human life.
Vicente believes that bad design is often the result of
'the ingenuity gap', a concept introduced by Thomas
Home-Dixon. Very simply put, this gap is the distance
between our rapidly advancing ability to create technology
and our much slower developing ability to use it
successfully. As an example, Ontario's nuclear power plants
are being closed down at tremendous expense, not because we
lack the technology to make them safe but because that
technology is so difficult to understand that the workers
are unable to properly utilize it. So how can the gap be
bridged?
The answer, according to Vicente, is to adopt a 'systems
based' approach to solving problems. Instead of looking for
purely technological answers, we must seek solutions which
integrate human users and the technology they use. Key to
this search is the design of the product interface or
controls, the point of contact between humans and
technology. The VCR clock is an essential feature but the
difficulty of setting it negates its usefulness. The
ingenuity gap can only be prevented by considering both
human psychology and technological capability when solving
a design problem.
It is here Vicente suggests technical writers, tuned to the
needs of users, can play a role. If their input is sought
at the design stage they can help create an interface that
is logical and intuitive to the user. However, Vicente
noted that a technical writer brought in at the last minute
will be unable to salvage a poorly designed interface with
documentation, no matter how well written.
Vicente concluded his formal presentation by urging people
who understand the problem of bad design to spread the word
and to help create an environment where good, human
centered design is demanded. He went on to take some
questions from the audience and also talked about his
efforts to reform the engineering curriculum at the
University of Toronto. His mission is to encourage or
require engineering students to take courses in the
humanities with the goal of producing better rounded
students who will adopt a more human based approach to
design. While the process of these reforms is not complete,
he feels that progress has been made. Most encouraging
though is that the strongest advocates for reform are
industry executives, people who can see the costs of poorly
designed technology on a daily basis. They regard these
reforms as inevitable, and this can only bode well for
future VCR clocks, nuclear reactors and everything in
between.